The simplicities and complexities coexist and, throughout life, I craft them. Here, I hand them to you...
"I want to rewind every time because the words have so much meaning: they were there when nobody cared *always knew what I was feeling* -Sugar Ray
Thursday, January 17, 2008
Sensationalize
So come on be melodramatic. the way I know you. it shows you mean what you say. you overly mean what you say. mister essence of everlasting can not live forever without carving his name upon something concrete.
this seems like an excerpt from a bigger piece but i like it!
i think you should relook at the third and fourth line. "overly mean" is basically the same thing as melodramatic and i think you would get a different effect if you try to play with those lines and get them a little deeper.
"can not live forever without carving his name upon something concrete." i really love those lines (: keep up the good work!
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thank you for the comment! and well, I would love to go to the seminar, but I'm not much of a guitarist. hahha.
this seems like an excerpt from a bigger piece but i like it!
i think you should relook at the third and fourth line.
"overly mean" is basically the same thing as melodramatic and i think you would get a different effect if you try to play with those lines and get them a little deeper.
"can not live forever
without carving his name
upon something concrete."
i really love those lines (:
keep up the good work!
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