My flustered mind's in overdrive,
demoned by other creative minds.
Pen on paper even lacks originality,
everyone conforming in totality.
Void of thoughts a fresh.
Figured I would tell you I like Phil Lesh.
Back to the basics, though.
I have realized every one is walking toe in toe.
Is there room for more?
Brand new ideas to tour?
Or has it all been stated and received
by an audience who has heard it all before?
A struggle to find a person to be,
without losing me or becoming
too attached to we.
Truly shown no one is completely free.
Tired from living tainted lives,
Day by day, I'm taking a new
D
I
V
E
down deep and when I arise to the occasion,
An embracing blank page will remind me of reason.
1 comment:
I love the way you use your words. I don't usually like rhymes but i liked how you used the words "originality" and "totality."
loved the phrase "walking toe in toe" not something you hear often.
and then I got to the word dive and it reminded me of an Andrea Gibson poem and i got excited. :P
Oh and getting audio files in your blog is a little bit more complicated.
1) find the mp3 file on your computer.
2)go to boomp3.com
3)upload it there
4)after it's uploaded there should be a code that starts out with < embed or whatever..copy and paste that into a post.
-A.
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