When the melody spills from the simplicity, it breeds curiosity.
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Never forget what you've done for me,
this breeze I feel is poetry:
all it means is what you see.
I believe in
all the dances you've dug outta me,
I believe in
ALL OF THE REALITIES you have shown me.
You taught me to see from the vantage point you set free.
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hey i jus wanted ta thank u on commenting my interpretation of ripple, theres actually some more to it but i didnt bother to write it down. and that part u sed u didnt understand about the ch0rus, i was trying to explain that "real" reason and understanding (for the most part) cannot be derived from pure thoughts alone, and we cannot rely on thoughts alone to derive any logical meaning, because of the "ripple" analysis about thoughts being that a thought is like a ripple, well when u have a ripple, the water (mind) is not steady and calm, therefore, it cannot properly understand a correct meaning, basically, what im getting at is that intuition is the real sight not through the device we call our "mind". we shud learn to read "feelings", not necesarilly emotions, but pure understanding through enlightenment, and a still mind where there is no thoughts latching on judgements to ideas and what not.
idk its kinda hard to explain for a retart(me), and besides the whole point is that u cant convey true meaning through words and Ha what a paradox for me trying to do just That. but anyway, i also wanted to say that i think you can write way better. i kno u sed ur happy with it right now but im here to tell u that u have alot more potential that u havent fully used yet and i havent seen wat u kan really do yet. i think u shud calm ur mind and really put ur energy into what it is exactly ur trying to say. creativity comes from a place when the mind is still and the soul is open. let it flow
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